The school that Aerynn goes to will no longer be the School, or the long name that it's formally called. It's referred to as The Institute but kids and sometimes teachers.
Major Empyrean Edit Number Two:
The Institute is meaner, stricter and overall worse than the old version. It'll have a morning rolecall, shared bedrooms, silent hallways and washrooms which are only open during lunch. It'll also have a washroom that no one uses, which will be the headquarters for Aerynn's friends until it's found out.
Major Empyrean Edit Number Three
Aerynn's school will work on an odd/even day basis, with school going from 9-5, with hour-long classes. Her schedule will also be included in the actual story --
The Institute Of Advanced Learning And Militarial Assistance Schedule, Year 2100
Day One
First Period: Mathematics
Second Period: Countries and Customs of the World
Third Period: English (Part One)
Fourth Period: Lunch break
Fifth Period: Stealth and Spy Training
Sixth Period: Science
Seventh Period: Study break
Eighth Period: T.E.R.R.O.R
Day Two
First Period: The History Of War
Second Period: Battling Without Weapons
Third Period: Languages of the World
Fourth Period: Lunch break
Fifth Period: English (Part Two)
Sixth Period: Fighting With Weapons
Seventh Period: Study break
Eighth Period: Ability Training
Major Empyrean Edit Number Four There will not be over 100 characters mentioned, there will only be 33, including Aerynn and Erik and everyone important. All of the characters also have an individual schedule which I made on Excel (lovelovelovelovelove!) and the classes which they share with Aerynn are highlighted.
Major Empyrean Edit Number Five I WILL edit at least one page a day. I promise myself :$ I'll get Empyrean back one track :)
.... starting tomorrow :$
S a r a h
2 comments:
Good luck!
are you rewriting most of Empyrean or just editing?
I tell myself I'm just editing, because re-writing it all seems to scary right now :\
I fear I might be re-writing :P
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